Focus group comments
I received a few detailed comments from my class as they watched the rough cut of my production. the positives i received were "very funny", "comedy was well done", "convincing lip syncing" and would appeal to target audience. This was excellent feedback and made me feel achieved with the work i had done as one of my main aims for the production was to make the humor appeal to the student age range and as they laughed during the screening i could tell they appreciated the humor. The comments which were picked out to help improve my production further were "shadow of the camera in final shot", "some lip syncing was slightly out" and "tripod in view in two shots, intentional?". This also was very good observations and feedback as i can now address these issues to becoming one step closer to making a better production. A few things i picked up on while watching my rough cut were the performer misses the first word of the song, tripod appears in shot twice and the camera shadow in the last shot is extremely obvious. I will address these issues by trying to edit them to make them unnoticeable or i will re shoot that footage so it does not have these mistakes.
